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RPG Design: Character Development Example

sascha — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 13:36:43 +0000

Welcome back to the RPG Design series where I try to talk a bit about the work and progress on my game project, the development of the darkish, space -themed computer role-playing game Stellar Conspiracy: Entanglements Of The Marenis Sector (working title).

In the last part I’ve introduced the character design template I’m using and mentioned to post a character example next time which I’m doing hereby while introducing you to Eliza Retinienne, a Gessjanian security systems expert from the planet Shielle, a small world bordering on the fringe of the Suulun Sector which in turn stretches over a large area of the southern galaxy.

Eliza is one of the key characters in the game’s story and one of the characters whom the player is supposed to encounter and who eventually joins the player’s party. She is also supposed to receive her own side-quest in which the player can engage to help her out of the threatening situation she is currently in.

Note that this sheet is basically just here to give an example of how the character design template can be used to shape out a character so I suggest not to look too critically into the details. Things can (and will) still change and also the sheet is not filled out completely, for one reason because some details are irrelevant for this character and for another that I haven’t found any other suitable details for her yet. Either way I hope this gives a good example of how to utilize the template!

Full Name	Eliza Cathrine Retinienne
Nickname or short name	Eliza, sometimes called Cathy
Image
Character Type	Co-Protagonist
Gender	Female
Species	Gessjanian
Class	Security Systems Expert
Age	30
Summary	Eliza used to be a forefront engineer who worked for Seciate Armaments on a highly confidential Security Systems project. Later during the project she came to disagreements with Seciate about the target clients for the system she worked on. She left Seciate in a dispute, not accepting the bribe she has been offered to stay quiet. She had enough presence of mind to suspect that she would soon become the subject of an assassination attempt, in order to prevent her knowledge being of use to anyone else. Seciate however underestimated her smartness and she narrowly escaped while killing the assassin (rather unintentionally though). Since then she is on the run from SECIATE.
Biography

Appearance Information
General Appearance	As a Gessjanian she is typically small and delicate. Gessjanians look almost human-like but not quite completely so. (She still looks too casual! Needs a few exotic touch-ups here and there, maybe a face tattoo, Shielleese jewelry or glasses).
Dress Style	Eliza wears an inconspicuous dress consisting of a beige utility overall, black engineer boots and a rugged, dark brown leather jacket with orange highlights.
Trademark Objects(s)	Might be something very simple like for example a red bandana wrapped around the boot.
Other worn objects (Jewelry, Tattoos, etc.)
Height	Medium tending to small (~155cm)
Weight	In shape
Body Type	Petite
Eye Color	Brown
Hairstyle & Color	Medium long, straight, originally dark brown but dyed to auburn/orange
Facial Hair	N/A
Other distinguishing or species-related features
Health Condition	Good
Signature Movement or Tic

Behavioral Information
Persona	The Damsel in Distress
Alignment	Neutral Good. Eliza ultimately believes in the good side but she is affected by the Player Character’s choices and alignment changes.
Single adjective to describe this character	Cute.
General Disposition	She’s on the run and she knows she’s in danger of being assassinated. She already killed somebody but she knows it was the only way to safe herself so she doesn’t feel too much guilt about it.
Traits
Common Emotions	Encouraging, Worried, Stubborn
Emotional Stability	Despite the fact that she is being on the black list of her former employee she takes things pretty well. Though she occasionally suffers from Paranoia, once she joins the Player Character’s team she feels a lot safer.
Likes & Loves
Fears	Her prime fear is to be caught or killed by SECIATE.
Addictions	None noteworthy.
Secrets	She carries the knowledge of SECIATE’s secret project with her. She shares the fact with the Player Character but besides her and SECIATE (incl. their client) nobody else knows about it.
Dichotomy (inner conflict of the character)

Professional Information
Education/Intelligence	She might have studied at the Shielle Technical Facility, maybe some degrees in physics, materials science and electronics engineering.
Profession and attitude towards it (good or bad)	She’s an expert in security systems and people with her skills in this field are rare. She is aware of this and advertises her abilities to others if it’s of use for her.
Skills	Security Systems, Materials Science, maybe Computer Systems
Special Abilities

Location Information
Residential Place	She’s in hiding, perhaps somewhere on an off-route-world in the Kessebour sector.
Places often visited by the character	Not too many, she tries to keep a low profile so she is careful of visiting public places. She tries to blend in with the crowd knowing that it makes an assassination difficult.
Where has the character been?	Suulun Sector, Kessebour Sector and around, maybe even some worlds in the Shicia Sector.
Locations where the character is most likely to “blend in”

Background Information
Birthplace	Shielle
Family	Not currently relevant.
Backstory

Story-related Information
Story Purpose	Eliza is supposed to meet (and join) the Player Character somewhere during an incident in the Kessebour sector. Once she joined the player’s party one will be able to initiate Eliza’s side-quest in that her threat from SECIATE Armaments is ultimately being resolved as an outcome (probably by bringing SECIATE down somehow with help of the Player Character’s absurdly daring courage).
Gameplay Purpose	Eliza takes place as the security systems expert in the player’s crew who can be used to get access to areas that would otherwise be off-limits (or much harder to access).
Why does the character involve him/herself into this situation?
What does the character want?	Primarily she wants to bring SECIATE Armaments down so that they are no longer a threat to her. There might be a secondary goal for her which could be another reason why she joins the player’s party.
Other roles and identities
Aspirations
Objective(s)
Reports/Answers to	The player (once she joined the party).
Who reports to this character?	Nobody.
Reactions to different events in the game
Moral choices the character has to make in the game
Relation to other significant characters

Dialog-related Information
Tagline	Something like “I know this kind of lock! Give me a minute!” … (need to think more about this one!)
Dialog Tics and Slang
Accent
Dialog Ideas

Additional Information
Where will (did) the character die?	She is not supposed to die.
Epitaph: What will go on the character’s tomb stone?
How did the character loose his/her virginity?

Extra Information
Plot Ideas
Other Notes & Ideas	A Security Expert who was working for a questionable organization on a secret project involving a powerful illegal weapon until she realized the wrongdoings of the organization and attempted to sabotage the project. She could escape but some traces led the organization to her. Since then she is on the run from the organization and their bounty hunters and assassins.
Concepts & Inspirations

RPG Design: Character Development

sascha — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 12:14:01 +0000

And back to the game design topic! The part I love most about game design is that you can create worlds full of life, intricacy, intrigue and interesting characters, experimenting with scenarios and situations (that would otherwise probably have negative repercussions in RL™).

As a programmer you’d ever only write your code and if you are happy with it that’s fine but we one-man-game-developer types are more like Jack of all trades who want to create complete worlds … and stories. And then tell those stories by means of the game. And maybe throw a bit (or a large chunk) of dynamics in there again … as programmers.

One extremely satisfying aspect of game design (for games where narrative is important) is the development of characters that should act throughout the game. Creating characters is just as much fun as the other bases! If you do it right and create deep and sympathetic characters people will love them.

And even villains can be sympathetic. In fact they should be! Who likes an antagonist that is completely unsympathetic? Nobody, right? But why should you even like a villain, after all he’s the guy who needs to be defeated? The answer to this is that the guy who is the villain is so only in the context of our story. Maybe he’s not so bad after all in a different context. Or in short: Antagonists also have a life, feelings … but guess what? Now I totally digress! I actually wanted to show you my new and all fresh character template that I came up with to shape out characters for my game.

[ad#gog_arcanum_box]The template I’m introducing here is based on a template that is used by the two authors of The Ultimate Guide to Video Game Writing and Design, a book I’ve recently purchased which I think is just slightly overrated on Amazon but still definitely worth it’s money. The two authors have the character building template fully laid out in their book for the purpose of their example but I’ve made modifications to it so that it suits the holy needs of my RPG design.

This character building template is quite extensive and there might be a few items that you want to throw out for your design or you’d want to add other questions appropriately. Also, as stated in the book by the authors, when designing a new character with this it’s not required to go through this in a linear way. Skip sections and fill them in later … like a puzzle. Likewise it’s not always necessary to fill out all the boxes. Some minor characters don’t need that level of detail.

It’s also worth to note that most of what you fill into this template is for your eyes (or for your teams eyes) only. So write away care-freely! Only some of this information makes it into the game anyway however the whole additional info helps to give the character the amount of depth that is needed to make him/her an exceptionally outstanding character.

The template consists of several tables with rows of questions on the left column and the answers or details to fill in on the right side (in which for the purpose of explanation I’ve entered a description of the kind of text that goes in).

So without much further ado here’s my character building template used to help creating the story for my totally epic role-playing game (which *cough* should be in the shelves somewhere within the next millennium!). In the next post I will show an example of how the template is used with one of my (player party) co-protagonist characters … hopefully without revealing too much information about the game’s story.

Of course feel free to use it, change it, adapt it or come up with your own template! I’d love to hear about them! And always keep in mind: We’re not digging ditches or performing brain surgery here, we’re making games. Lighten up, for chrissakes. (That was an actual quote from the above mentioned book).

Full Name	The complete name of the character.
Nickname or short name	A nickname or short name (if the full name is too long to be used practically in-game).
Image	An image of the character. This can also be a first sketch or a vague idea to see in which direction it goes.
Character Type	Pick one (or two if necessary) from the following list: Protagonist, Co-Protagonist, Antagonist, Hero, Anti-Hero, Mentor, Helper, Herald, Pivotal, Sidekick, Lackey, Ally, Henchman, Mole, Love Interest, Best Friend, Confidante, Partner, Catalyst
Gender	Male/Female
Species	The species (or race, ethnicity) of the character.
Class	RPG-related character class as it appears in-game.
Age	The age of the character. This can also be an approximation.
Summary	A short descriptive text about the character.
Biography	A biographical text about the character. Optimally as it should appear somewhere in-game for the player to be readable.

Appearance Information

General Appearance	Describe the general appearance of the character.
Dress Style	What the character usually wears and how he/she wears it, clothing, armor etc.
Trademark Objects(s)	The trademark object of the character can be for example the favorite weapon of him/her or other items with that the character is seen often.
Other worn objects (Jewelry, Tattoos, etc.)	What else does the character wear? Jewelry? A tattoo somewhere on the body, glasses or maybe a portable wrist computer?
Height	The impressionistic height of the character.
Weight	The impressionistic weight of the character.
Body Type	Is he/she slim, slender, athletic, muscular, obese, average etc.?
Eye Color	The eye color.
Hairstyle & Color	Short, long, straight, curly, thick, thin, greasy, unkempt etc.?
Facial Hair	If the character is male and sports a beard, describe the beard here.
Other distinguishing or species-related features	This could be unique appearance features that the character posses. Like for example a mole, a scar or a rare color pattern on those head fins of your aquatic species.
Health Condition	Is the character healthy or in a rather poor condition? Antagonists often have some sort of ailment to associate a physical negative side with them. But also the good guys could be affected by this.
Signature Movement or Tic	Does the character move in a specific way or has any movement-related tics? And why does he/she have these? Handle with care, don’t make your character look like a fool (unless they are supposed to be one).

Behavioral Information

Persona	One or two words that fit as the characters persona. Examples could be “The bad-ass”, “The naïve cutie”, “the thinker” etc.
Alignment	You can draw this from the D&D rules, e.g. lawful good, true neutral, chaotic evil etc. or just pick any other system’s or your own definitions.
Single adjective to describe this character	Smart, Tough, Arrogant, Weary, Optimistic etc.
General Disposition	The general nature and tendency of the character. What is the character’s most common attitude and why?
Traits	Specific traits and characteristics that he/she possesses. Does the character have any phobia, is he/she blind or maybe a person who cannot swim?
Common Emotions	Enter three or four common emotions here. E.g. amused, angry, confused, bitter, callous, cheerful, cynical, depressed, hopeful, love-struck etc.
Emotional Stability	How well is the characters spirit? Is he/she the confidence in person or perhaps slowly turning into insanity?
Likes & Loves	What or whom does the character likes or loves?
Fears	What fears does the character possess? Unlike any phobias mentioned under ‘traits’ this text should describe a larger fear that might be relevant to the story.
Addictions	Is the character addicted to any drugs (alcohol, sweets, tobacco, harder stuff?), maybe a gambler or a nympho?
Secrets	What secrets does the character carry with them? These might be dark or embarrassing secrets from the past that nobody else should know about but that might or might not be revealed during the game.
Dichotomy (inner conflict of the character)	Does the character possess any inner conflict? For example an (to the outside appearing) ruthless mercenary who actually has a good heart.

Professional Information

Education/Intelligence	What kind of education did the character receive. Maybe he/she is/was a doctor or a professor.
Profession and attitude towards it (good or bad)	Profession can be (but doesn’t necessarily has to be) the same as the character’s class . How does the character stand to this profession?
Skills	Noteworthy skills that he/she possesses. Not necessarily skills as they appear in the game.
Special Abilities	Characters in role-playing games usually posses one or more of these. A psychic who can see into the future, a species that has the ability to see in the dark …

Location Information

Residential Place	Where does the character live?
Places often visited by the character	These can be places that the character frequently visits or where he/she often can be found.
Where has the character been?	Did the character travel a lot and gathered much experience meanwhile or was the character stuck in a limited area?
Locations where the character is most likely to “blend in”	A hunter might best blend into a wilderness environment, a rogue-like character might blend into the shady streets and bars of a city etc.

Background Information

Birthplace	Where was the character born?
Family	Information about the characters family if it’s relevant. Parents, brothers or sisters, cousins, niece or nephew, etc.
Backstory	What happened in the character’s life that led to his/her current situation.

Story-related Information

Story Purpose	What is the character’s purpose in the game’s story? Do they have their own agenda? (They better have!) In Role-playing games this often becomes a whole quest related to the character, even if it’s a side character (remember Yuffie from Final Fantasy VII?)
Gameplay Purpose	What purposes does the character have for the gameplay? If this us the player character then it’s obvious: the purpose is to be controlled by the player. If it’s a side character they could have all kinds of gameplay purposes, for example this character can lead the player somewhere where he/she would otherwise not be able to go. Or they could be a shop owner who sells items to the player or perhaps they are just combat support etc.
Why does the character involve him/herself into this situation?	Maybe he/she has no other choice or they are on the hunt for the same goal as the player character (and their ways cross because of this), or are a mole and want to lure the player into a trap, or they are altruists (heh, yeah right!) …
What does the character want?	The ultimate goal that the character seeks.
Other roles and identities	Does the character have an alter ego, maybe a secret one? For example in Star Wars Emperor Palpatine was Darth Sidious at the same time, Ben Kenobi the Hermit was once known as Obi-Wan Kenobi the Jedi Knight.
Aspirations	This could be just something the character desires, perhaps an adventurous life, wisdom, barrels of rum or being left alone.
Objective(s)	Objectives the character needs to fulfill throughout the game to achieve his/her goal.
Reports/Answers to	If this is one of the player’s sidekicks they usually only reports to the player character. Other characters might report to their hierarchical leader. Maybe the player character needs to report to a specific NPC in-game.
Who reports to this character?	Other characters that report to this character.
Reactions to different events in the game	Are there any noteworthy events in the story that make the character react in a certain way? Maybe the character is a cold-blooded killer but one event in the game makes him reluctant to kill a specific person, maybe he’s falling in love with one of his victims? Or a quiet and shy character starts to run berserk because something enrages her.
Moral choices the character has to make in the game	Will he save the damsel in distress … and with that neglect the fate of hundred’s of other people? Or there might be a situation where the player can make a choice between either him or the rest of his crew being caught and imprisoned by adversary forces.
Relation to other significant characters	To which other characters does this character has a special relation? He/she could be a love-interest for the player character, a buddy of another character in the crew or a character who has an aversion toward another party member.

Dialog-related Information

Tagline	The tagline of your character. For T-800 this was “I’ll be back!”, for Sgt. Murtaugh this was “I’m getting too old for this shit!”. Maybe your character doesn’t need this but it’s good to think about it.
Dialog Tics and Slang	Does the character use any specific words or talking style? Maybe he’s addressing himself in the third person, talks in a very noble manner … or the opposite (and by this I don’t mean to overuse the F-bomb!) or maybe he’s an Orc with a very low, smooth voice like Barry White.
Accent	Does the character possess a certain accent? Perhaps he/she speaks human language but has a strong accent of their own species.
Dialog Ideas	Enter any dialog ideas related to this character here.

Additional Information

Where will (did) the

character die?

In case the character is supposed to die in the game (driven by the story) or the character died already. Where and how did it happen?

Epitaph: What will go on the

character’s tomb stone?

Regardless of whether the character dies or not.

How did the character loose

his/her virginity?

Might or might not be relevant to your story but it’s a fun question nevertheless.

Extra Information

Plot Ideas	List any plot ideas that are related to this character here.
Other Notes & Ideas	You can enter any notes and ideas here that further help shaping the character.
Concepts & Inspirations	A field to paste images and photos into. Maybe you already have other sketches that might be candidates for this character or you associate the character with a certain actor/actress.